Today, I want to tell people to protect the environment because I am a member of school “Friends of the Earth” Club. With the fast development of economy, the environment is more and more terrible and there is no denying that more and more people becoming sick because of the environment. So we have to spare no effort to protect the environment.
I have some suggestions about how to protect the environment. First, we can use public transportation instead of private cars because it can save energy. Secondly, create something that is beneficial to the environment because the environment is really important. Finally, save electricity by switching off the light when you ()leave home. What we should be doing is to make every effort to protect our only hometown----the Earth.
作者：徐颐珽
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Today, I want to tell people to protect the environment because I am a member of school Friends of the Earth Club. With the fast development of economy, the environment is more and more terrible and there is no denying that more and more people become sick because of the environment. So we have to spare no efforts to protect the environment.
I have some suggestions about how to protect the environment. First, we can use public transportation instead of private cars because it can save energy. Secondly, we should create something that is beneficial to the environment because the environment is really important. Finally, we can save electricity by switching off the light when we leave home.
What we should be doing is to make every effort to protect our only hometown----the Earth.
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